I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Malo e lelei Nikau. Great job on you're writing! I just think you change the font because it's quite hard to see. I like how you had lot's of colours and it was an outstanding post it tracked my eyes!, Maybe just work a little bit on you're grammar as well - Milla
hey Nikau its Benaiah i liked the way that you said that cody had a rat's tail did you think that you would be cody's friend for so long why did you do cody's life by
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Malo e lelei Nikau.
ReplyDeleteGreat job on you're writing! I just think you change the font because it's quite hard to see. I like how you had lot's of colours and it was an outstanding post it tracked my eyes!, Maybe just work a little bit on you're grammar as well - Milla
hey Nikau its Benaiah
ReplyDeletei liked the way that you said that cody had a rat's tail
did you think that you would be cody's friend for so long
why did you do cody's life
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