I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Malo e lelei Nikau, I really liked how you have collaborated with other people. But did you copy and pasted the "how is the earthquake formed?" Maybe try adding more details and do an introduction of what an earthquake is. Amazing Presentation anyways
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Malo e lelei Nikau, I really liked how you have collaborated with other people. But did you copy and pasted the "how is the earthquake formed?" Maybe try adding more details and do an introduction of what an earthquake is. Amazing Presentation anyways
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